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hmm well

uh not to bad i see some potential although i really think you need to work on a focal point for the animation there was a lot of rather random phrases (Spoilers here in)such as they come in thousands as well as a few others but i mean random is good in some places but it really didnt fit in the setting of this particular anmation i mean it seems as though your basic plot was the air was poluted with some kinda poison and so everyones trapped inside and theres these ''packs'' of people going around killing those who have survived indoors but it wasnt very clear and if the main character was so afraid of the guys comeing to resort to such an act as suicide ''ending his existance'' then the focal point should have been way more on the men comeing for him where you had very little focused on them or if it was the isolation and for lack of a better description ''cabin fever'' driveing him mad to the point where he would have such paranoia that he would simply perseve a rescue team as an army of men out to get him then you should have focused more on the isolation and rations running low though really you didnt display any direct focus on any particular point of anything and if you were trying to express insanity by this then the changes should have been much more rapid and clostrophobic to better express just how distraught the written narrarator was all in all it had no real focus and without that its not quite affective in catching the veiwers intrest leaving it rather vauge and boring no offence im kinda goin for constructive critisism like i said at the start of this review i definitely see potential in you so although i personally dint like this animation in paticular better luck next time and try to practice more on focus Gl :)

uh good one thing missing

uh it was an excelent flash lots of original ideas id of never thought of one nice thing to add would be in the credits you had the band names but not the song and i cant think for the life of me which SOAD song that was other then that excellent job

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ok you put the thought into it enough to make the camera visible in the mirrior but you didnt put enough to think when she waved her arm in front of it all you would see is her arm or when the cammer rocked back and forth you didnt think to move the veiw with it? or was that part of the joke? it was alright but im more curious if that was a joke or a mistake then ROFL so i dont even know what to vote lol or say bout it's quality

OMFG AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHH

HOW MANY ARE THERE I Just got to the one that ith thimple and i gotta start over forr quite literally the 90th time OMG how many are there

not bad too easy

its not a bad game needs more levels i beat it in less than five mins ''''tip for those who are stuck''' ok its real simple once you relize they cant over lap or cross in any way so just look where the colors are and if something connects in between them run the line around the outside of the two others remember not all squares have to be colored good luck nice game fun but short

i still dont like any of Mauslands work

this game is horrid i mean for one the graphics are well for lack of a better word lame two if your gona name a game so closely to unbeatable make it nearly unbeatable on top of that i noticed this in all of Mauslands work the music is just annoying not a funny annoying not like im going mad annoying just like look at the floor and say this is so dumb kinda annoying the style was down right well once again for lack of a better word stupid i mean how can you take an early space shooter style even with the "space ship" and then base it in some lame bee hive scene i mean WTF as for violence well just because it has explosion sounds doesnt mean its violent no blood or gore i mean if your audience is little kids that blood and gore relize you better have something interesting i mean kids that age dont have a real big attention span i mean you can make the franks adventure series but you cant animate blood not that you really animated anything in the franks adventure series although id like to know how you got your hands on all that hentai as for the interactivity yeah well like i said "early space shooter style" like thats new and creative humor like i said "not the funny kind of annoying" sooooooo over all it well....sucked come on gold members dont litter the front page with this junk